Grabs popcorn and a soda . . .

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Those are all very helpful and I think I know how to do it...maybe?  The problem is it's also an action scene an action is not my native tongue.  But I broke my brain on an idea that helps that....maybe.  Give me five-ish hours and I think I'll do something....maybe!   Other news, I have more ideas!  I finally came up with my favorite trope character, the gentalman thief, and he fits in one of worlds!  EEEEEEEEEEEEE!  And after I re-dub the episode I need too I will start showing all the places I see.

As I've never done any film editing, I can't say as I'd know how to do such things...  **chases Muse away from the Spaghetti Westerns**  Not food! Not! Food! Shoo! 

I imagine they're somewhat used to you by now...  And I think the idea of "the hole" is a decent one, seeing as the Glup would need to get out of it, in order to rejoin the general process of re-absorption and re-hydration? Being in a hole could possibly prevent that particular Glup from ever absorbing or being absorbed by another... what if you made it a sinkhole? With a cave, and a small stream of goo-ish water which Naggal must be pushed through/ float down, in order to regain the surface and rejoin the rest? That sounds much more epic-ish; especially for a creature which cannot move far and has very few experiences to relate to, when it comes to a cave or a stream.  And sinkholes happen by very gradual processes so it's entirely possible, even on a planet that has pretty much nothing except a little moisture, and dust/rock...