The Pen is Mightier than the Sword: Quincunx - Viewing Profile

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Characters:

Tzimfemme: Rydia: Minta: Rosemary

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Race/Gender Details:

Tzimfemme is a nude Minoan bull-leaper, with flail and sometimes filth and a manic gleam in her eye.

Rydia, the elven image of her FFIV self, grew elegant long ears and adorned them with pearls.

Minta is tiny to the point of gnomishness--indigo hair and pale, round cheeks--and constant motion.

Rosemary wears gaudy gowns and silver jewelry, advertising the newness of her wealth in 1180s France.

Feedback Level:

Readership is all I need. However, if you do want to leave feedback, one of the best types you can leave is 'I understood the story to mean x, y, z'; I read that, deduce which metaphors malfunctioned and caused the difference between intent and feedback, and can correct them.

Most often, when I leave feedback, the piece is perfectly expressive in parts and I try to ask questions which help define the imperfect parts. Compliment is implied in every feedback, since the piece has to be good enough to give the partial vision before I can critique it, and I rarely post nothing but a compliment.

Geld:

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